The only beefs I have:
-the name (1P, 2P)....kinda misleading.....doesn't give you a good idea of what the plane really is.
-the "incompatibilites"....(some of) which really aren't incompatibilities.....for example- Hogan didn't have a strong grip, and is a "1P" guy according to Hardy's system.....and in Hardy's descriptions he has a "WARNING!" of this....
-the fact that if you go beyond the point where the left arm and shoulders line up you are no longer a "1P" guy (as I understand it)....even tho you've prolly just made a longer swing (and/or not as incredibly flat) and are now on the Turned Shoulder Plane as a result......still can be a Double Shift or Single Shift tho.....same motion essentially......doesn't at all make it similar to a "2P" swing.....as I see it.
-the horribly posed pictures in his GD article. (they look sooooo bad.....lol
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